And Bad Mistakes. I’ve Made a Few.

I had lunch with an old friend of mine, who bought the eBook version of “Suicide By Everest” and gave me a list of spelling errors and grammar issues that he had found. (Thanks Troy W.!). I’ve since gone into the KDP author portal and updated the novel.  Although I hope that I’ve now caught all the errors, I’m sure that readers will continue to find issues.  One of the benefits of publishing on KDP is how easy it is to fix and update.  As new errors are found, I will update this Blog entry.  —Scott

November 28, 2018

Chapter 3: Hong Kong, Subchapter 7. (~page 52, paragraph 2). Was: “…that after Jesus was resurrected and he appeared…”. Corrected “…that after Jesus was resurrected he appeared…”

Chapter 3: Hong Kong, Sub-chapter 14 (~ page 72, paragraph 3). Was: “…as it had been that been that long…”. Corrected: “…as it had been that long …”

Chapter 6: The Happy Ho, Sub-chapter 5 (~page 155, paragraph 11). Was: “As much hard as it may be for you to believe…”. Corrected: “As hard as it may be for you to believe…”

Chapter 6: The Happy Ho. Sub-chapter 7 (~page 162, paragraph 4). Was: “hank you. I’m glad you called.” Corrected: “Thank you. I’m glad you called.”

Chapter 6: The Happy Ho. Sub-chapter 11 (~page 175, paragraph 5). Was: “… thirty-five-year-old man that that seems hell-bent…” Corrected: “…thirty-five-year-old man that is hell-bent…”

Chapter 6: The Happy Ho. Sub-chapter 11 (~page 175, paragraph 6). Was: “…better for everyone if you if you left Utah entirely.” Corrected: “…better for everyone if you left Utah entirely.”

Chapter 7: Salt Lake City. Sub-chapter 3 (~page 188, paragraph 2). Was: “He could climb up one his old favorite mountaineering routes…” Corrected: “He could climb up one of his old favorite mountaineering routes…”

Chapter 7: Salt Lake City. Sub-chapter 6 (~page 199, paragraph 5). Was: “… I’d give you have seven days to pay…” Corrected: “…I’d give you seven days to pay…”

Chapter 9: Bullet Train. Sub-chapter 1 (~page 252, paragraph 3). Was: “…handing Brig his small pack as hed shouldered his own…” Corrected: “…handing Brig his small pack as he shouldered his own…”

Chapter 9: Bullet Train. Sub-chapter 3 (~page 257, paragraph 14). Was: “While you were into the bathroom….” Corrected: “While you were in the bathroom…”

Chapter 9: Bullet Train. Sub-chapter 9 (~page 278, paragraph 2). Was: “…weaved in and out of traffic and bicycles madeg faster progress…” Corrected: “…weaved in and out of traffic and bicycles made faster progress…”

Chapter 10: Lhasa. Sub-chapter 6 (~page 330, paragraph 2). Was: “Tommy followed, dropped his baggage…” Corrected: “James followed, dropped his baggage…”

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